“No Goodbyes” A Spoken Word to Original Music

Posted on February 14, 2024 by Karima Hoisan

Hi Everyone,
Happy Valentine’s Day:) ❤️
This is not a video, just a spoken word to some original music I composed in Garage Band and it seems my muse wanted to deliver an Anti-Valentine’s Day Message, in the lyrics:) The two images are a composite of AI Art by Dale Innis and my avatar in SL on her Chopper:) So have fun and I hope you trance-out like I did making it:)
PS I didn’t plan this for Valentine’s Day, but my muse is absolutely perverse sometimes..and she made me write these lyrics (against my will..almost) Maybe I should add a Warning: Not appropriate to listen to on February 14th:)
Still It’s a very danceable Spoken Word…  so enjoy with the sound up high!!

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31 Responses to “No Goodbyes” A Spoken Word to Original Music

  1. daleinnis's avatar daleinnis says:
    February 14, 2024 at 3:27 pm

    Anti-Valentine indeed! No soft pink hearts here. 🙂 Excellent, though; such a vibe!

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  2. Karima Hoisan's avatar Karima Hoisan says:
    February 14, 2024 at 3:34 pm

    Hee Hee but Happy Valentine’s Day to you Dale…I just happened to finish it today so..why wait?, but glad you enjoyed the vibe !!! “I’m Outa Here” WOOOOOOOO

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  3. Benjamin Grossman's avatar Benjamin Grossman says:
    February 14, 2024 at 5:59 pm

    This music is awesome! So many cool twists and interesting sounds!! Keep it up.

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  4. michnavs's avatar michnavs says:
    February 14, 2024 at 8:00 pm

    Happy Valentine’s day Karima❤️

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  5. Ephemeral Encounters's avatar Ephemeral Encounters says:
    February 15, 2024 at 2:55 am

    Wonderful as always Karima 😊Loved it ❤️

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  6. Karima Hoisan's avatar Karima Hoisan says:
    February 15, 2024 at 8:28 am

    Haha I’m always ready Maggie!!!! :):) 🤩

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  7. Cindy Georgakas's avatar Cindy Georgakas says:
    February 15, 2024 at 8:41 am

    Oh I love this karmima💕💕💕 Happy Valentine’s Day my friend💓

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  8. johncoyote's avatar johncoyote says:
    February 15, 2024 at 9:03 am

    I did enjoy dear Karima.

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  10. Navin's avatar Navin says:
    February 15, 2024 at 3:59 pm

    Karima on a chopper…flowing catchy & cool tunes 🔥…now, that’s actually hot!…amazing composition…hey, you were singing…how creative & something new…I really enjoyed the whole pack ❤️

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  11. calmkate's avatar calmkate says:
    February 16, 2024 at 9:53 am

    your creative juices are truely flowing … I have garage band but no idea how to use it. Mind you I have no sense of tune either 🙂 Therefore your talent leaves me in awe!

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  12. jonicaggiano's avatar jonicaggiano says:
    February 18, 2024 at 4:39 pm

    You’re right, very dancible. Was too wrapped up in the dancible part to listen to the lyrics the first time 🤣 definitely coming back and listening to get the words the second time 😁 clever, and sorry that someone hurt you, but we’re all blessed that you were able to come up with this catchy music. You look badass on your bike. BTW, this is Scott, not Joni

    …and now Joni is taking over this comment 😁 I love how you basically mentioned all the things that are uncomfortable in a relationship and how you shared a woman leaving her husband and glad to get out, not enjoying Valentine’s Day the next time it rolls around, and who needs another holiday to spend money, anyway?! Love is how you treat and care for one another ❤️ This is so catchy, just insanely honest, just the way I love my poetry and great lyrics. We really enjoyed it Karima. Sending you lots of love, hugs, blessings an prayers always

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    • Karima Hoisan's avatar Karima Hoisan says:
      February 19, 2024 at 9:44 am

      Laughing, I love this 2 X 1 comment by both Scott and you Joni:):)
      Scott, no need to listen to much to the words, they have the end rhyme in common and fit the beat…I made the music first on this one, so just had fun word riffing to it:) Yes, pribably this is born from a real life story..let’s say 2007, when I left “the grapevines and the olive brine:”) Oh yes in Second Life I WAS a badass biker girl hehe and in real life rode a Vulcan for awhile back in 1996:) Thanks so much Scott for all the support in all I do..I really appreciate it:) 🙏

      I so agree on your definition of love and it has little to do with hallmark cards hehe. Joni could you guys copy this great comment on my YouTube Channel. I would love to have it there:) bAlso would you click thumbs up and give me your official YouTube approval? So glad you found it enjoyable and honest..Thank you sweet friend…for being there for me. Big hugs!!

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  13. Karima Hoisan's avatar Karima Hoisan says:
    February 19, 2024 at 12:23 pm

    Awww big hugs back (all around) thanks a bunch for going to YouTube:) Much love and hugs to you both ❤️🤗🙏

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  14. hoytheron's avatar hoytheron says:
    February 19, 2024 at 2:35 pm

    Karima!!! You have turned into a rapper! I love it! Your tough attitude really shines through on this one. And cutting the cord, but keeping the knife! Don’t mess with Karima!

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