“Sunset Pool” by Dale Innis on ChatGPT AI Art
Please Listen to my poem recited to my own electronic music. If you want to read along, I will put the words below, but this is a piece made to be listened to and not just read. You can also DANCE to it:)
Swimming at The Very Edge of Night
Swimming at the very edge of night
it’s my thing I do in the half-light.
I’m in the pool almost every day at 5pm
the frogs are starting their serenade
the temperature drops & it looks like rain.
But who can stop me?
This addiction keeps me alive…
Keeps me fit and it keeps me energized.
Any hour is good to swim in the day
when the sun rays are safely tucked away.
Locked in a trance in this watery prism,
it’s about losing myself to the hypnotic rhythm.
And the pool pool pool
is the deepest shade of blue blue blue.
Oh yes even without the sun
it shines with an inner light
and I repeat and repeat
“Alhamdulillah
Thank you for my Life!!”
My heart is in the zone
it pounds to this beat
oh man it feels so good
feels so cool & sweet,
And the pool pool pool
is the deepest shade of blue blue blue
and the frogs coax me to the line
I count my strokes & then their croaks
It’s dark but it shines with an inner light
and I repeat and repeat
“Alhamdulillah
Thank you for my Life!!
Frogs are pairing up and trying to find a mate
Sun is under the horizon
and its getting real late
Just ten more laps to get to the line
but I’m going to finish, oh yeah, right on time
* * * * * * * * *
Swimming at the very edge of night
It’s my thing I do in the half-light
I’m in the pool at 5pm
the frogs are starting their serenade
the temperatures drops
it looks like rain,
But who can stop me?
This addiction keeps me alive
keeps me fit and it keeps me energized.
Any hour is good to swim in the day
when the sun rays are tucked away
locked in a trance in this watery prism
its just about losing myself to the rhythm.
And the pool pool pool
is the deepest shade of blue blue blue
Oh yes even without the sun
it shines with an inner light
and I repeat and repeat
“Alhamdulillah
Thank you for my Life!!
My heart is in the zone
it pounds to this beat
oh man it feels so good
It feels so cool & sweet
And the pool pool pool
is the deepest shade of blue blue blue
and the frogs coax me to the finish line
I count my strokes & then their croaks
it’s dark but it shines with an inner light
and I repeat and repeat
“Alhamdulillah
Thank you for my Life!!
Frogs are pairing up and trying to find a mate
Sun is under the horizon
It’s getting real late
just ten more laps to get to the finish line
and it looks like I’m going to finish right on time.
Karima Hoisan
May 11, 2024
Costa Rica
*Footnote: Because of my recent autoimmune diagnosis, I can no longer get sun on my skin. I must use a long suit, like a snorkeling suit and swim close to sunset.