When You & I Were Vampires

Vampires

Image: “Vampires” by Dale Innis on Midjourney

Soooo I totally jumped the gun as they used to say in my day,
and thought Spillwords had rejected me but….it looks like they didn’t:)
I received a letter last night from Dagmara K informing me that although this
poem is not part of the 13 Days of Halloween, it will be featured on October 26th.
She told me it was not necessary to remove this one, but I want to get the excitement rolling for the 26th on their site….so stay tuned to read and hear it on Spillwords next Saturday (if you haven’t already)
and I wanted to perserve your precious comments here too:)

When You & Are Were Vampires

When you and I were vampires,
strolling the foggy docks
down by the levee;
we were all knowing, all powerful.

Walking on the dark side, the night time
was our time and our venue,
blood red was the only color we sought,
to offset our black clothes, white faces,
cold skin…….

You can read & hear the rest on Spillwords October 26th!!!
Happy Halloween!!

Karima Hoisan
August 20, 2022
Costa Rica

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24 Responses to When You & I Were Vampires

  1. daleinnis's avatar daleinnis says:

    Ooohhh shivery! I love “our hands almost warm”. It’s the little things! And continually amazed that you’re doing all the music, voice, cinematography… now.

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    A very chilling poem Karima πŸ‘»

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  3. swadharma9's avatar swadharma9 says:

    suitably chilling, & very well done!πŸ‘πŸΌπŸŽ‰πŸ€—πŸ’«πŸ₯³

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    • Thank you soulkin, I was feeling a little evil when I wrote this hehe (just kidding) but I kind of Method Acted it out:) and could get into their cold skin and feel it:) πŸ§›πŸ»β€β™€οΈπŸ·πŸ–€

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  4. calmkate's avatar calmkate says:

    lol too chilling for spillwords … how deliciously gross!

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  5. An excellent piece of writing. Bravo.

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  6. jonicaggiano's avatar jonicaggiano says:

    Oh, how fun, and a big congratulations, Karima, this is wonderful. I will be sure to tune into SpillWords to read the whole piece, it sounds like a great one. Love the artwork too. How fun! Big hugs my friend! Love Joni ❀️

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    • Awww thank you so much.I decided to take down the recording I had put up and am happy to say they will use it Saturday on their site. They have chosen another image (can’t wait to see it) but I loved what Dale came up with for my blog!! Stay tuned..Love and hugs Sweetie β€οΈπŸ€—πŸŒΉπŸ§›πŸ»β€β™€οΈβ™₯️🍷

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  7. My short story, “Halloween Treat,” will be featured on October 25th. Congratulations, Karima! Looks inviting!

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  8. Oh I love it, Karima and can’t wait to read it. I too will be sharing some day around then with you! Yippee my beautiful vampire friend. Love it and can’t wait to read itπŸ’“

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  9. jonicaggiano's avatar jonicaggiano says:

    Karima, congratulations on this publication. I just left you some love on SpillWords. I loved this narration and piece. It is a great poem and with your voice wow, it was great. Just amazing work my friend. Congratulations again. Love you!

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