Backstage tala-jay-sol
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ll Rail Wa Hamad by Ilham al Madfai
Backstage
<<*>>
Scrims and scenery of our lives,
love’s stage,
where all our dramas unfold…
At a certain age,
we build a prop room of memories,
but try as we may,
some plays when closed,
leave nothing left to store… anymore.
I pull the ropes backstage,
the transparent curtain opens,
revealing a small family
celebrating an unusual wedding.
The backdrop,
a room wrapped in tapestries,
decorated in love and haste.
The bride and groom, grateful enough
for this small public acceptance.
Dressed humbly, but glowing,
they glide down the Turkish carpets,
half way to the orchestra pit.
A colorful hand embroidered dress
for the woman of
foreign blood and tongue,
A new suit for the young man
who weds her against
all predictions and traditions,
The orchestra drones a repetitive beat
Brothers dancing with brothers
holding hands and singing songs
invented on the spot,
a clever custom of their village
Sisters clapping on the sidelines,
Hope, is the flowered centerpiece
and the chandelier lighting tonight.
The cardboard set looks almost real,
the audience, so caught up in illusion,
that they clap along,
shouting out well wishes,
The conductor, tips his wand and smiles.
The big white cake,
the tray of gold jewelry,
the professional photographers
reserved not for tonight,
but next season’s billing.
I pull on the ropes once more,
and remain thoughtful backstage,
The blood red velvet curtain closes,
while I hear anonymous stagehands
striking this set.
Karima Hoisan
April 27, 2023
Costa Ria
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Loved reading this Karima !The music adds to your words which makes the whole piece amazing ✍️❤️✍️
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Thank you so much Maggie. As you may have guessed, this is a scene taken from my life in 2000. I am glad you enjoyed the music too. He is an Iraquí singer and one of my favorites. Thank you for listening and reading. Big hugs to you 🤗
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Yes I thought that was the scene Karima 😊.I loved the music you picked for your last post too ❤️Big hugs back to you.🥰
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Big smiles..thank you for what you mention about the music. Music is very important to me, not only for reciting, but I must have “just the right music” to compose too. This piece is Iraqi.. the one from Oasis Moon is by Karunesh..he’s fabulous. https://www.realmusic.com/artists/karunesh
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My pleasure Karima❤️ thank you for the link 🙏.I shall go and have a listen and maybe download some .Much love to you my friend 🥰🥰
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My pleasure Maggie 🌹
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Beautiful in every way … especially, ‘hope is the flowered centerpiece..”
John
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Thank you John for stopping by and leaving your impressions. I really appreciate that. Nice to meet you
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A wonderful meditation on memory, and presentation of a memory of your own at the same time. Your words and your voice and the music deliver it beautifully; thank you yet again for all that you create and share!
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Thank you Dale..yes these memories reappear in technicolor when I least expect it..I welcomed this one with arms opened wide, as it’s been a few days since a poem came knocking:) So glad you enjoyed my recitation with music too. Thank you for always being there so supportive:)
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what a beautiful memory shared in looking in at life in story so beautifully shared.
“Hope is a flower centerpiece” what a brilliant line Karima! The music is always a delightful escape which I listen to your beautiful radio voice! 👏
I love it!!! 💗
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Awww smiling big-time Cindy!! Thank you for this shiny comment about this poem and my voice (blushes) on a beautiful day here. It made it more beautiful.. I’m glad you enjoyed my musical choice too, he’s one of my favorite Iraqi singers. Big hugs and thank you always for your welcome visits:)
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oh I’m happy to hear that my friend as you have gifts beyond words. sooooo good and it’s always my honor to visit! 🥰. Your work speaks for itself! 🥰
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and you speak so eloquently my friend.
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Lovely memories and so elegantly written.
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Thank you Dawn..just what we were discussing on your post…how music is such an influence for us both:) Glad you enjoyed it
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Beautiful memories, Karima, elegantly written and eloquently recited. Music is always an added spice. 👏💐💖🙏
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Amazing verbal poetry dear Karima. Good evening from Michigan.
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Good evening from Costa Rica and so glad you enjoyed this spoken word piece John:):)
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I did dear Karima. I sound like Bukowski. I have posted many YouTube video. Good to have a pretty voice.
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