
Stars & Sunny Room Karima Hoisan & Dale Innis on Midjourney AI
You Make The Magic
The magic of shape and color and shades of light
of textures so darkly smooth, and so sharply bright
Roll off my retinas until I almost faint and fall into bloom
I didn’t think I’d find all of this in my glorious sunny room.
What sorcery of love or bewitched ways await?
I’m caught in your bright lights awaiting my fate.
But your colors call me, your stained glass & wire
Your remarkable talent is perfume that sets me afire.
The stars are everywhere, stars & moons, ethereal tunes
The incense, burns, the candles flicker, the singer croons
I am sitting cross-legged on a pile of pillows, rolling tapestries
If I close my eyes, this light show grows and takes away my realities.
When I open them, the leafless tress beckon me to help them leaf
They know more than I, so I dance in their bare arms, feeling their grief
But you wave your hands around us and it is Spring and we all rebirth
It is any time you choose it to be, my Wizard, My Magician my Beloved Earth.
*Footnote for Cindy:) A good example of my “loopy poetry” after dental surgery yesterday…
Karima Hoisan
October 17, 2023
Costa Rica
i love the poem, especially the image & thought of being so surprised that i “fall into bloom”!🦋🌺🦋wow, i could feel that somewhere i didnt even know existed🙏🏼 i just love reality-play, which poetry excels at🌹🥰😘 what heavenly/earthly poetry it is too, a grand celebration of your embodied life, with your roots buried in the rich soil🌞🌳🌳🌳🕊️🌞🤗 thank you, soulkin😘❤️
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Ahh soulkin, yes that line “fall into bloom” is not a very normal choice of words hehe, but in my sort of altered state. I actually changed another line to it..because, it’s more what I saw in my head. I treasure your comments because we have such similar yet different life experiences and both know from the inside out about reality-play…within the Big Play. Thank you fellow Earth-child for this beautiful comment.🙏❤️🙏
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🌺❤️🌺
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Such a stunning imagery with an amazing flow…you know, I could hear your voice when I was reading this piece…you’ve given life to Dale’s magnificent & colourful AI art…I even love the title…You Make The Magic…coz this is exactly what you do, Karima ✨🌟💫
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Aww thank you Navin and if I would have felt better, I would have made a recording, but my swollen face(oral surgery) made it very hard to talk:) I’m much better by the way and so glad you enjoyed this piece and the whole idea of it…Thank you for your kind words about me at the end..but same goes for you..We poets have the power to move and excite, calm and inspire..You most certainly do Naveen🌹🙏
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Oh, hoping you’re feeling even more better…recovering slow n steady…I very much enjoyed this piece of yours…it’s my pleasure, Karima…it’s kind of you to say such lovely words to me…I’m honoured 🙏💫❤️
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Aww I’m so glad you did and yes, Alhamdulillah, I am feeling much better now..You will see me on your blog soon:) I see you have a new poem:)
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“What sorcery of love or bewitched ways await?
I’m caught in your bright lights awaiting my fate.” I adore this line Karima
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Thank so much Mich and I appreciate you reading this one..and that line Is pretty visual..I actually just described what I was seeing:) So glad you did enjoy it.
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Wow girlfriend, this was quite stunning with your imagery so vivid in full color! I was waiting for your voice to accompany your words but “loopy” might not have sounded like what you hoped for. lol … was I the Cindy in your footnote or might you have more windy friends like me? xo
You and Dale are magic 💓❤️🙌🏽😘
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You are the only Cindy girlfriend in myentire life,historically, virtual, real, extra terrestrial..etc:):) In another comment I apologized for my reply being so short, because of my loopy condition after oral surgery and you said
Oh no 🙈 !!!
So sorry to hear!!!
I’d love to hear your loopy poetry”
and so here I present it to you:):) 🌹
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Hurrah for loopy poetry! 🙂 The image is a great combination of RL light and hallucinated art. (Now I want to go play with the earlier version of the AI engine that I used for those Sunny Room pictures.)
The universe is the magic! ✨
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Glad you liked my loopy verses, Dale and I think you are calling my side (The stars) “hallucinated art” and haha that is a perfect term for them too. Oh play away in old engines, I have no doubt something will pop up and inspire me again. I do like the older AI engines even a bit more…they don’t produce such picture-perfect, photo-realistic images..and they are definitely more wild and surprising:)
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Beautiful! If this is work is done while being loopy, I want what you’re on!
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Thank you so much Hoyt…hehe I’ll see what I can do…but luckily, I am beyond those meds now:)
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Loving warm colour scheme of the room, bathes in the sun even more surreal. Hope you have a speedy recovery of the dental surgery. 🙏
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Thank you so much Cassa… I feel fully recovered and appreciate your kind wishes too. Glad you enjoyed the warm room…It inspired me:)
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Oh those starts are so pretty!
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Why thank you so much for visiting, Kayleigh, and I am glad you found my stars attractive:)
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