
Image: “Vampires” by Dale Innis on Midjourney
Soooo I totally jumped the gun as they used to say in my day,
and thought Spillwords had rejected me but….it looks like they didn’t:)
I received a letter last night from Dagmara K informing me that although this
poem is not part of the 13 Days of Halloween, it will be featured on October 26th.
She told me it was not necessary to remove this one, but I want to get the excitement rolling for the 26th on their site….so stay tuned to read and hear it on Spillwords next Saturday (if you haven’t already)
and I wanted to perserve your precious comments here too:)
When You & Are Were Vampires
When you and I were vampires,
strolling the foggy docks
down by the levee;
we were all knowing, all powerful.
Walking on the dark side, the night time
was our time and our venue,
blood red was the only color we sought,
to offset our black clothes, white faces,
cold skin…….
You can read & hear the rest on Spillwords October 26th!!!
Happy Halloween!!
Karima Hoisan
August 20, 2022
Costa Rica
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Ooohhh shivery! I love “our hands almost warm”. It’s the little things! And continually amazed that you’re doing all the music, voice, cinematography… now.
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Thank you Dale for liking what I do:) It’s really fun to push envelopes and see what is possible. I like this one too, they are so joyfully evil:) so cold blooded:) Love the image you made..It captured that!
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A very chilling poem Karima π»
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Oh thank you Sadje for this best of compliments:) I’m glad you could appreciate my “true confessions” π§π»ββοΈπ·
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Youβre most welcome
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suitably chilling, & very well done!ππΌππ€π«π₯³
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Thank you soulkin, I was feeling a little evil when I wrote this hehe (just kidding) but I kind of Method Acted it out:) and could get into their cold skin and feel it:) π§π»ββοΈπ·π€
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lol too chilling for spillwords … how deliciously gross!
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Hahaha Maybe I will get trophy that has your words engraved haha
“too chilling for spillwords” Thanks Kate for listening and this comment that made me smile:)π§π»ββοΈπ·π€
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actually this is the first time I’ve ever heard of SWs rejecting a work … you might have a first!
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Actually I just heard from them, I might have to take this down, I don’t know yet, but they said they had so many entries,,and yet, they will publish mine on the 26th before the 13 days,..,I hope my posting this here does not affect that… crossing fingers
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ouch, might be best to trash this π
Glad to hear that!
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An excellent piece of writing. Bravo.
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Much appreciated AJ:) I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for letting me know:)
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You’re welcome π
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Oh, how fun, and a big congratulations, Karima, this is wonderful. I will be sure to tune into SpillWords to read the whole piece, it sounds like a great one. Love the artwork too. How fun! Big hugs my friend! Love Joni β€οΈ
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Awww thank you so much.I decided to take down the recording I had put up and am happy to say they will use it Saturday on their site. They have chosen another image (can’t wait to see it) but I loved what Dale came up with for my blog!! Stay tuned..Love and hugs Sweetie β€οΈπ€πΉπ§π»ββοΈβ₯οΈπ·
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My short story, “Halloween Treat,” will be featured on October 25th. Congratulations, Karima! Looks inviting!
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Oh yes I saw!! Congratulations and I am looking forward to reading that:):)
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Oh I love it, Karima and can’t wait to read it. I too will be sharing some day around then with you! Yippee my beautiful vampire friend. Love it and can’t wait to read itπ
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Oh Goody Goody we are all very Halloweeny hehe. I can’t wait to see what you have come up with .. You must check out the ducklings on their first Trick or Treat.. that is my BIG Halloween Production!!! Much love and welcome back:):)
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It was fun and out of character for me but you know.. we do what we do. I will for sure and share it again. Thanks, trying to get here.. lolπ
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Karima, congratulations on this publication. I just left you some love on SpillWords. I loved this narration and piece. It is a great poem and with your voice wow, it was great. Just amazing work my friend. Congratulations again. Love you!
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Thank you so much Joni..loved your comment on Spillwords. I am thinking loving healing thoughts and sending them to you my friend.
Much love,
Karima
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